Fixes for some about page grammar mistakes
Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2020 5:45 pm
Hi everyone,
I just stumbled upon the "About" page which also seems to be part of the mobile landing page. There are a couple of grammar mistakes that needed fixing. I've tried to correct them and slightly changed a couple of sentences. Feel free to use them if you want to.
Since the announcement of the end of official servers on 18th of december 2013, some people decided to make their best to let this fabulous game alive.
Since the announcement of the end of the official servers on December 18, 2013, some people decided to do their their best to keep this fabulous game alive.
At this time, Dyox was the main developper, and decided to make his own private server, and made is source code closed.
Dyox, who was the main developer at the time, decided to create his own private server, and keep its code base closed sourced.
That's what Return of Reckoning is : a War-Emu private server. (Just the colon)
That's what Return of Reckoning is: a War-Emu private server.
We'll try to do our best to continue our good work, and let this server up to let Warhammer revive !
We'll try to do our best to continue our good work, and revive Warhammer!
That's why now, we are trying to show everyone what was this awesome game.
That's why now, we are trying to show everyone how awesome this game is.
We are working on our spare time, and are doing the best we can. Everything is not perfect, but we tend to.
We are working in our spare time and are doing the best we can. Not everything is perfect but we strive for continuous improvement.
I just stumbled upon the "About" page which also seems to be part of the mobile landing page. There are a couple of grammar mistakes that needed fixing. I've tried to correct them and slightly changed a couple of sentences. Feel free to use them if you want to.
Since the announcement of the end of official servers on 18th of december 2013, some people decided to make their best to let this fabulous game alive.
Since the announcement of the end of the official servers on December 18, 2013, some people decided to do their their best to keep this fabulous game alive.
At this time, Dyox was the main developper, and decided to make his own private server, and made is source code closed.
Dyox, who was the main developer at the time, decided to create his own private server, and keep its code base closed sourced.
That's what Return of Reckoning is : a War-Emu private server. (Just the colon)
That's what Return of Reckoning is: a War-Emu private server.
We'll try to do our best to continue our good work, and let this server up to let Warhammer revive !
We'll try to do our best to continue our good work, and revive Warhammer!
That's why now, we are trying to show everyone what was this awesome game.
That's why now, we are trying to show everyone how awesome this game is.
We are working on our spare time, and are doing the best we can. Everything is not perfect, but we tend to.
We are working in our spare time and are doing the best we can. Not everything is perfect but we strive for continuous improvement.