Hi everyone,
I just stumbled upon the "About" page which also seems to be part of the mobile landing page. There are a couple of grammar mistakes that needed fixing. I've tried to correct them and slightly changed a couple of sentences. Feel free to use them if you want to.
Since the announcement of the end of official servers on 18th of december 2013, some people decided to make their best to let this fabulous game alive.
Since the announcement of the end of the official servers on December 18, 2013, some people decided to do their their best to keep this fabulous game alive.
At this time, Dyox was the main developper, and decided to make his own private server, and made is source code closed.
Dyox, who was the main developer at the time, decided to create his own private server, and keep its code base closed sourced.
That's what Return of Reckoning is : a War-Emu private server. (Just the colon)
That's what Return of Reckoning is: a War-Emu private server.
We'll try to do our best to continue our good work, and let this server up to let Warhammer revive !
We'll try to do our best to continue our good work, and revive Warhammer!
That's why now, we are trying to show everyone what was this awesome game.
That's why now, we are trying to show everyone how awesome this game is.
We are working on our spare time, and are doing the best we can. Everything is not perfect, but we tend to.
We are working in our spare time and are doing the best we can. Not everything is perfect but we strive for continuous improvement.
Fixes for some about page grammar mistakes
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Re: Fixes for some about page grammar mistakes
I remember some guy once joined the discord and was not amused that there were spelling issues on the website. He was so mad about it that he simply left again because of this. End of story. Cool that you took your time to teach our french guy some grammar :p (yaliskah)
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Re: Fixes for some about page grammar mistakes
The original phrasing is odd, but it's close enough to understand. Reads like it has been written by someone for whom English is not their first language.
For all we know they may not have any native English speaking people on the team.
For all we know they may not have any native English speaking people on the team.
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